Wednesday | October 10, 2007

Story: Part 2

The lights are slowly coming into being, saving me from sleep. Slowly I see the reflection of my face, bruised and scraped. I come to the realization that I am in a cage. A transperant cage holds my body and nurtures it, heals it, shows me my face.

The men around me in their white suits and masks notice my apperent conscienceness and I just want to get out of here. I know they made this just for me, but I just want to leave them. I despite the luxury at times. I hate being better than normal. I hold my positions proudly, yet I wish for their doom all so that finally, one day I might feel something.

This most recent attempt was the closest I have ever gotten. I will proceed to follow.

These bars shake, but hold. This burning takes over so that i can truly concentrate on my separation.

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1 - Very, very good. I love the idea and this style. I like writing in similar style... you know, the one where no one truly understands it but the author. Your blog is interesting. (Comment this)

Written by: alpha at 2008/06/21 - 08:41:17
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2 - hi^^ (Comment this)

Written by: nhocxinh9x at 2008/08/14 - 16:02:41
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